very nice brushing

Nice pic, doesnt make my faves that nasty yellow stripe blew it

nice brushing !!

I like the yellow line, though I think it is a little too pronounced. I can feel the warmth/heat in this piece. Great brushwork.

not bad not bad, although some crits if i may.

Top left planet texture seems somewhat distorted at points, and when compared to the lower right it's not quite spherical. The ring is ok but it doesn't quite emphasise the 3d nature of the planet. I'm guessing you followed greg martins planet creation tutorial for that one looking at the embossing, but i think some more complex features such as clouds could have been used. +dinyctis has a more comprehensive planet tutorial that's worth a gander. Also the outer glow feature of the top left planet could have a colour change, thinking of the brushing colour, the reflectivity of the planet... might do better to echo that colour more than use that purple.
the light diffraction line is a bit too thick really, whilst the flares are done very well, the diffraction is not so good.
Stars are ok, but could be better.... especially if you arranged some clusters, and areas closer to flares looking less with stars than darker areas.

Nice stuff overall webdiod, good to see you trying other genres of art, keep it up

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Thanks alot for your insight

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like the fire looks reallz awesome

like the fire looks really awesome

All in all, pretty good. I think there, definitely,
is some talent, here. Nice work.

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